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My lastest script.. please check it out...i still need a name for it?

OK so, the year is 3441BC, the setting.....Tokyo. The people of earth are being threatened by an ancient plague that no one coudve foreseen coming, even the writers of the story. The special plague causes humans to slowly mutate into various speciaes of monkey or green goo. There is no means by which peeps can preditc which you will turn into..goo or monkey . Soon a full scale galactic war breaks out between the monkeys and the goo (then some porn) Finally the enterprise shows up and they figure out a way to use the transporter to turn everyone back into humans again, and there is much rejoicing then some more porn its time for the enterprise to leave for starbase 47, but Picard wants to stay with the remaining monkeys. They leave him behind, but he is quickly killed by the remaining green goo. what do you think? btw, u can check out my other script here... http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Aj9BW3IXUlt94AaLY.SzOwjty6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20071228141045AAUWjAP

Public Comments

1. It's nonsense
2. OK no offense but who would ever watch that? Goo and monkeys? You're kidding, right?
3. What are u smoking?
4. thats not a script .. its more of a horrible idea ...
5. lol 3441 BC (before Christ), and the Enterprise is there, along with Green Goo.. Box Office hit right there, lol