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Sorry this are actually just dot points.. i'm not sure if some make sense.. if you could fix any errors.. that would be Great!! Primary Data -A liveability questionnaire was designed (Appendix 2) -20 liveability questionnaires were distributed to all age groups, which aided to determine peoples attitude and opinion of Eagleby (Appendix 2) -A survey of council facilities was completed through first hand observations, which helped provide information on existing facilities and what improvements need to be made and what needs to become available. (Appendix 3) -One interview took place, by a person who helps at the Eagleby Community Centre (Appendix 4) -Graphs were made from the ABS data collected (Figures 3.1.1 -3.1.5) -Photos were taken of Eagleby’s council facilities (Figure 3.2.1) -Maps were created, showing the location of council facilities in Eagleby (Figure 3.3.1, 4.1.1) -Concept sketch plans were drawn of council facilities ( Figure 4.1.2 - 4.1.3) Secondary Data -Data was collected from the 2006 ABS census, which helped verify the population and the type of community. (Appendix 1) -Maps showing the location of Eagleby were found through Internet websites. (Figure 1.2.1- 1.2.3, 3.3.1, 4.1.1 ) - Photo’s showing future concept of council facilities were found through internet websites (Figure 3.3.1, 5.1.1) -Cost of repairs and activates for council facilities were found via websites - Further data needed on Eagleby was collected through internet websites

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1. (Centre was right for the English speaking world, changed for US) Primary Data -A livability questionnaire was designed (Appendix 2) -20 livability questionnaires were distributed to all age groups, which aided to determine peoples attitude and opinion of Eagleby (Appendix 2) -A survey of council facilities was completed through first hand observations, which helped provide information on existing facilities and what improvements need to be made and what needs to become available. (Appendix 3) -One interview took place, by a person who helps at the Eagleby Community Center (Appendix 4) -Graphs were made from the ABS data collected (Figures 3.1.1 -3.1.5) -Photos were taken of Eagleby’s council facilities (Figure 3.2.1) -Maps were created, showing the location of council facilities in Eagleby (Figure 3.3.1, 4.1.1) -Concept sketch plans were drawn of council facilities ( Figure 4.1.2 - 4.1.3) Secondary Data -Data was collected from the 2006 ABS census, which helped verify the population and the type of community. (Appendix 1) -Maps showing the location of Eagleby were found through Internet websites. (Figure 1.2.1- 1.2.3, 3.3.1, 4.1.1 ) - Photo’s showing future concept of council facilities were found through internet websites (Figure 3.3.1, 5.1.1) -Cost of repairs and activates for council facilities were found via websites - Further data needed on Eagleby was collected through internet websites
2. As what indicated in your question the paragraph needs to be checked for misspellings right? Here it is: Primary Data -A livability questionnaire was designed (Appendix 2) -20 livability questionnaires were distributed to all age groups, which aided to determine peoples attitude and opinion of Eagleby (Appendix 2) -A survey of council facilities was completed through first hand observations, which helped provide information on existing facilities and what improvements need to be made and what needs to become available. (Appendix 3) -One interview took place, by a person who helps at the Eagleby Community Centre (Appendix 4) -Graphs were made from the ABS data collected (Figures 3.1.1 -3.1.5) -Photos were taken of Eagleby’s council facilities (Figure 3.2.1) -Maps were created, showing the location of council facilities in Eagleby (Figure 3.3.1, 4.1.1) -Concept sketch plans were drawn of council facilities ( Figure 4.1.2 - 4.1.3) Secondary Data -Data was collected from the 2006 ABS census, which helped verify the population and the type of community. (Appendix 1) -Maps showing the location of Eagleby were found through Internet websites. (Figure 1.2.1- 1.2.3, 3.3.1, 4.1.1) - Photo’s showing future concept of council facilities were found through internet websites (Figure 3.3.1, 5.1.1) -Cost of repairs and activates for council facilities were found via websites - Further data needed on Eagleby was collected through internet websites
3. As what indicated in your question the paragraph needs to be checked for misspellings right? Here it is: Primary Data -A livability questionnaire was designed (Appendix 2) -20 livability questionnaires were distributed to all age groups, which aided to determine peoples attitude and opinion of Eagleby (Appendix 2) -A survey of council facilities was completed through first hand observations, which helped provide information on existing facilities and what improvements need to be made and what needs to become available. (Appendix 3) -One interview took place, by a person who helps at the Eagleby Community Centre (Appendix 4) -Graphs were made from the ABS data collected (Figures 3.1.1 -3.1.5) -Photos were taken of Eagleby’s council facilities (Figure 3.2.1) -Maps were created, showing the location of council facilities in Eagleby (Figure 3.3.1, 4.1.1) -Concept sketch plans were drawn of council facilities ( Figure 4.1.2 - 4.1.3) Secondary Data -Data was collected from the 2006 ABS census, which helped verify the population and the type of community. (Appendix 1) -Maps showing the location of Eagleby were found through Internet websites. (Figure 1.2.1- 1.2.3, 3.3.1, 4.1.1) - Photo’s showing future concept of council facilities were found through internet websites (Figure 3.3.1, 5.1.1) -Cost of repairs and activates for council facilities were found via websites - Further data needed on Eagleby was collected through internet websites