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How to better word this clustered up sentence? (Writing help, please +10PointsBEST/ANSWER ASAP/thmbs + Points)?

I need to revise the following: Coveting to expand my Contracting and Mechanic businesses, I ventured out into public transporting companies. I purchased a tow truck and 10 passenger limousine out of Los Angeles. After obtaining financing I completed the extensive (and time sensitive) licensing process required by the California Public Utility Commission (CPUC). Throughout networking with local vendors, after six months of operation, Pearl Limousine steadily began to acquire more vehicles to meet rising demand for luxury transportation service, totaling four limousines and two town cars within a four year span. chauffeurs were well trained, all permits were intact, pricing was competitive, maintenance on all vehicles were top shape/pristine”?” with our main goal of providing dependable and quality service to our customer base; (whether it be returning/contracted/high profile clients or people out enjoying the evening. [I need a closing statement explaining: the head guy "spencer" managed the business, created value, and sold his business. This will be one of the 5 businesses mentioned within an entreprenuers past history. I want it to be concise...and really show the MANAGEMENT style of what it takes to get a project running...so if you know if any focal words that would help out that'd be great. Could you reword this for me so sounds great? Attorneys and investors will be read this...thx....

Public Comments

1. is this a story or business report? I started reading but fell asleep (plus its late :) but try figuring it out oon ur own itll make u a better writer and make it more interesting. If it is a business report GOOD JOB!!!! :) EDIT: i wuldnt of answered but its been an hour and no answers and i felt bad. I guess i didnt help tho. srry. but i do sugged doing on own so better writer and more interesting.....thats kinda helping right???
2. Do your own homework, Bozo.